I agree with Carole. Well done on the school pictures except… in my opinion the background sort of overwhelms the actual photos. If it were my layout, I would add a white layer underneath that background layer then use a blend mode to soften the look of the school background. I think that would make the photos stand out more. As it is, my eyes are drawn towards it and not the actual school photos.
Again, great job on getting every thing laid out though. The actual layout of the photos is very good.